Oohh, sounds dark (writing-style-wise) and exciting. I like it! Also what an awesome premise. I'LL FINISH MY FICS IF YOU FINISH THIS, PLZ. :D I suck at titles, sorry. Though I like the title "Into the Sea of Waking Dreams"...or not? Yeah, okay, maybe a tiny bit pretentious. This kind of makes me think of Narnia/Voyage of the Dawn Treader, when they rescue that one dude from that freaky island where all dreams come true.

And I'm sorry you fell ill right on New Year's Eve, I hope you had a nice one anyway, and that you get well soon. :( :)

Oh man I am all over the place. (I blame the mojitos.) Happy New Year! :D